(I Heard That) Lonesome Whistle Blow
Abraham Smith surveyed the poetic landscape and noticed a gaping hole left by the tragic-hero musician, Hank Williams. But how to capture the man’s contradictions? Eleven number one hits between 1948 and 1953, and yet could not proficiently read or write music? How to capture the biography of a broken man who left a legacy of failed marriages and tales mired in drugs and alcohol? How to capture a man famous for singing, “I’ve never seen a night so long/ When time goes crawling by/ The moon just went behind the clouds/ To hide its face and cry?” In Hank, Smith wisely avoids the temptation to rewrite a Hank Williams biography and instead goes for something much closer to the bone. Smith’s Hank oozes the essence of the joys and heartbreaks of the man found dead at 29.
While Williams sang he never saw a “night so long” with “time crawling by” Smith’s book reads like a torrent of days and nights caught up in the rage of an unstoppable flash flood. The book is 129 pages of pure lyrical gush and rush. Every paged packed with images and narratives piling onto top of each other and seemingly spinning out of control. Yet this “out of control” is the charm of Smith’s book. There a rawness that Smith captures by giving his poems freedom to roam, freedom to digress. In Three Poems, Ashbery decides a “truer” way is to leave everything out, Smith’s book is a valid argument for putting everything in. To qualify “everything” that is every off-note, every failed song, every whistle on a country road with the sun setting the sky orange, but everything is not necessarily “the facts.”
The book, at first glance, looks like one long continuous poem, however Smith separates the poems with what he refers to as “gibberish cuss.” Here’s the way the book begins,
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call him pile
of crushed oysters before
the road crew drags
it’s slick kid and flat and hard
on the eyes it’s like it’s glazed
with rock salt penny candy
and the stuff that breaks new neighs
from knackered oldies
and sweat from rapt fear
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